You being the best in love,
Made it to the top at betrayal too…
Every tear you made me shed,
Nowhere was any less than the smiles you gave me…
You were the best,
Be it the love showcase,
Or,
The careless betrayal…
I found you flawless…
Like water flowing through river,
Even with steep stones on way…
I loved you,
Even with so many reasons to not fall for you…
Becoming the apple of my eye,
You ended up like the cribbing hurting dirt in the eye…
I often shed those tears,
With a mug full of tea in hand,
And,
Countless promises in mind and heart,
None of which you never fulfilled…
Stupid of my heart,
And my mind too…
I fell for somebody,
Who couldn’t even stand for his words…
I bow in front of you,
For you were the best,
Not just in love,
But at betrayal too…
Amazing…
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Thank you so much 🌝😊
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Take care of yourself for you’re beautiful! And I like this!
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Thank you so much for the encouragment. You too take care.
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Powerful ending!
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Thanks a ton☺☺
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Sure 😀
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☺😊
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It feels reading like mine own story. Best in love, best in betrayal.
And you write really really beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Pranay🌝☺
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Deep! I love it.
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Thanks☺☺
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nice poem. followed you
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Thank you☺😊
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Sure!!
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Sure. I will check them, definitely☺
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Awesome
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Thank you☺
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